Lots of detailed and well writen emotions displayed in this chapter. It's interesting to see Aragorn in such a vulnerable state, but you write it well. I really love seeing Arwen as the strength in this chapter. I like seeing her as a hero of sorts. I also really liked how you included the historical refernces from Tolkien's writing too. That added a lot to the chapter too. I'm interested to see how this plays out.
Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked the way I portray the emotions.It was quite hard to write Aragorn like this.I'm glad you like my Arwen. |
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