Lots of great things in this chapter. I am afraid I am going to have to re-read it later due to being a bit blurry today due to meds, but I really liked what I saw. I liked all the history you included. I wrote a story about Anarion's daughter, so I liked how mentioned her. Not many people talk about Anarion, even though he's one of my favorites. I liked how Arwen came up with the whole plan, I liked seeing her taking action to make things right. I feel that is very true to her character. I look forward to reading more.
Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.It is so nice that someone is reading here. Raksha and I assumed Anarion may well have had daughters who were not mentioned in canon.I love Arwen and see her as very wise. |