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Forgiveness  by Lady Bluejay 8 Review(s)
inglorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/23/2008
You have the uncanny ability to brighten my day. Every time. No matter what it is of yours I am read.

Thanks, Merry Christmas yourself,
Inglor

Author Reply: Thank you. I will try and continue in the same vein.LBJ

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/22/2008
Oh, insufferable indeed! But he WAS right, and she is blissfully happy now! Wonderful!

Author Reply: Always good to have a happy ending! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/22/2008
Lovely and sizzling at the same time and I agree with Lothirial I would be rather indignant too over having to marry a stranger and go far away from my home, even if in the end I fell in love with him and he me and maybe also having no say in it. The Imp

Author Reply: Yes, it seems odd to us but for years noble ladies had to suffer arranged marriages. I doubt they were always so successful! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

AlquawendeReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/21/2008
This is such a sweet scene into the lives of Eomer and Lothiriel. I sure don't envy Lothiriel the weather she has. ;) Thanks for writing!

Alqua

P.S. YAY! More "Tide of Destiny" coming!

Author Reply: I imagine she is kept quite warm. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/21/2008
Reading about Eomer and Lothy in domestic bliss with a cute and cuddly Elfwine just made me feel so warm inside. Thanks for posting this one-shot--which are tantalizing and satisfying at the same time. And I'm also excited about your next chapter of Tide of Destiny. Merry Christmas to you too!

Author Reply: Domestic bliss with Eomer - I love the thought! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/21/2008
That's lovely. A really nice wee Yuletide story.

Have a good festive season yourself, and thank you for the pleasure your stories bring throughout the year.

Author Reply: Thank you for your lovely comment. LBJ

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/21/2008
A lovely vignette, LBJ! Beautifully wrought.

Thank you!

- Barbara

Author Reply: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. LBJ

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/21/2008
This is a beautifully realized set of scenes--the cold, snow, dancing, and warmth seemed very real. And the people were lovely too, seen through Lothiriel's eyes. Despite her happiness, I understand her irritation at her father!

Author Reply: Nothing worse than someone crowing when they are right!Thanks for your nice comments.
LBJ

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