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Hands of a Warrior  by MP brennan 5 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/13/2009
Indeed a proper story for a protective woman-in-the-making of this people. Am so glad Eowyn recognizes fellow feeling in this girl.

Author Reply: Thanks!
Glad you enjoyed this chapter!
-Brennan

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/6/2009
This is such a good tale... I really like your OC (not a hint of Mary Sue about her) and I love the imagery you weave into your stories. The description of Eowyn's hands I found especially moving. :)

Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed it!
:-)
-Brennan

SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/6/2009
I liked this very much - your OC is really engaging and it's an interesting perspective on Eowyn!

Author Reply: Thanks!
Eowyn is one of my favorite characters, so I hope I did her justice. Chapter 2 is up!
-Brennan

TathrienReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/5/2009
Oh this was wonderful! I love the way you portrayed Eowyn; it just seemed to fit!
Great job, and I look forward to your next chapter!
~Tathrien

Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed! Chapter 2 is up.
Hope you keep reading.
-Brennan

MarethielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/5/2009


My mouth is dry. “My brother fights orcs tonight.”


Her eyes seem far away. “So does mine.”



(smile)

Okay. That does it. You're one of my favorite writers... Lucky you, you'll get to hear me gush every time you post something.

LOL.

Well done, Brennan. Keep 'em comin'.

~Marethiel


Author Reply: :)
Thanks! I'll do my best. The conclusion to this fic should be up in a couple of days . . . a little gushing every once in a while is good for the constitution . . .

-Brennan

p.s. Much of the credit for the lines you quoted go to my lovely beta, cairistiona. The original version stopped a couple paragraphs before that. She pointed out that this was random and wierd and suggested a little more interaction and subtle bonding. I ruminated, and this was the result.


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