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| Twins in Rohan by Lady Bluejay | 11 Review(s) |
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| Shlain | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/23/2020 |
| Oh my goodness! I am laughing like crazy. When I first started reading I thought how could an author do this. It is not exactly canon. But now I can see a brave maiden of Rohan doing this. And the twins' dialogue is written so well. Let's blame the wine for the ambiguous meaning in their words. Great job. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/10/2009 |
| Naughty thoughts are being raised here! Heh! And she thinks she can best an elf? Heh! Author Reply: Very naughty thoughts - but its all in the mind! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Idril Celebrindal | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
| OH that was great! Wasn't expecting the ending, more please indeed! Well written drew me in! Thanks for the giggle! Idril Author Reply: Glad I amused you. Your review is really appreciated. LB J | |
| Simple Girl For You | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
| Lady BlueJay, LOVED IT. This was very clever the way you elude and insinuate to something romantic and its something completely different. MORE PLEASE. ;-) Simple Girl For You Author Reply: I can't promise more but if the muse strikes!Thank you for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Marethiel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
~Marethiel Author Reply: Thank you. Your review is much appreciated.LBJ | |
| Laikwalâssê | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/9/2009 |
| oh how I love this stories leading the reader into an unexpected direction. The twins eagerness for the girls "first time" however made me wonder but the end was hilarious. Really nice little story. Thank you. Lai Author Reply: If I got you wondering I achieved my aim. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |
| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| Oh, this could be such a naughty little tale if one had a mind that worked that way! Hee, Hee,Hee! Not me though, I'm a good girl I am! More please, Lynda Author Reply: It's all in the mind - how true. Glad you enjoyed, Thanks for reviewing.LBJ | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| You had me guessing as to what she actually wants to do and was very surprised as well with the twins' reaction and apparent willingness. The end just had me laughing out loud. A very nice short piece. Author Reply: Thank you. Pleased I kept you guessing.LBJ | |
| utfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| I knew it was not going to be the obvious, but you totally "got me." This was great - very, very clever. Thank you Author Reply: Thank you. Glad I managed to fool you. LBJ | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2009 |
| Cute and funny; I didn't guess until the end that the twins knew all along what the girl intended. Author Reply: Ha! Glad I fooled you. Thanks very much for reviewing.LBJ | |