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Paradox of the Fourth Age  by Alassante 3 Review(s)
Roche ReyesReviewed Chapter: 22 on 4/6/2009
I was captivated by the story...I wanted to finish it faster...i enjoyed reading it...i wish to be informed when the story continues...thank you for making me escape reality and enter a world of adventure and romance...

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 22 on 1/13/2009
Nice....

You feel for Laureanne, she has met new friends and gladriel has asked her to look in the mirror. i wonder who is the blonde boy who looks at her intently and doesn't move and does she loose some of her children, it makes you wonder if she saves the past only to loose what is important to her for some reason.... Very nice....Update soon...

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 22 on 1/13/2009
Definitely a distressing vision for her. And the loss of memories would be most distressing indeed!

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