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| Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices by Lady Bluejay | 4 Review(s) |
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| EStrunk | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/6/2011 |
| I love Lothiriel's saucy side. Her comment to her dad was wonderful. As was her joke about Eomer's thoughts being easy to read. And I love that he is coming with her to Dol Amroth. They are just such great characters. Author Reply: I am glad you like them. I they to keep them believable. LBJ | |
| Radbooks | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 1/19/2009 |
| I'm enjoying this story very, very much! Forgive me for being lax in my reviewing, but I do eagerly await each chapter and print it out and read it as quickly as I can! I really like how much Lothiriel has grown and developed, Eomer too, but especially her. I'm eagerly looking forward to their trip to Dol Amroth. Oh, I'm also interested in seeing what he tells her about Bergit and her children... if he does. :) Author Reply: Hi, He does tell her -but not until the third part - which is post wedding. Glad you are still enjoying. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ | |
| Alquawende | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 1/18/2009 |
| I have been following along, but have just not been a very good reader by not reviewing... :( Apologies! This was an excellent chapter. I just love everything about this story. I especially liked the insights into Elphir and Meren's relationship. You really should write a story about them. No one's written a story dedicated to Elphir yet and you have created such a romantic story for him already! Another thing I liked was that the brothers, which I'm afraid have fallen into flat-supporting characters in fandom, I've noticed, are unique and different from each other and what fandom has created for them. some pickies: >> I know you won’t want to see him, if fact Éomer told me very forcefully that he won’t allow any risk of you being upset, so you can stay on here. Do you mean, "in fact"? Not "if fact"? >> Éomer took hold of her hand again. Also, in the story, "Eomer" when you put your mouse over it is in link format or something. Just thought you mgiht want to know. Thanks for writing! Author Reply: Glad you like my brothers. I enjoy putting in the little snippets. Sorry about the formatting - blame vista it doesn't like my old files. I am working on it. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 1/18/2009 |
| Lothy's willingness to see the new ruler of Harad says a lot on how much she has recovered. Poor couple has to wait for almost a year? Awww... Will we see more of Amroth? Thanks for the update. Author Reply: Well, I hope it passes quickly for them! Amroth does appear again in this part, but you will have a whole story about him after this. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ | |