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While Hope Lasts  by MP brennan 6 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/11/2009
Though my heart goes out to Gilraen - it is totally taken in concern for the two children.............. Yikes!

Author Reply: Yes, I did put them in quite a spot, didn't I? Though, as you saw in the next chap, I could quite bring myself to completely destroy them. I love my characters, but I wouldn't be surprised if they hate me most of the time. Thanks for reading!
-Brennan

SamaraReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/10/2009
Once again. Amazing. Things seem to really be winding up. My guess is that that poor, sweet little girl is not dead. Haramir will regret not going after her if such is the case. I hope to the Valar she does not die. No child, no little girl or boy should deserve that fate. Yet it does much to make this story realistic and enthralling. Keep up the incredible work.

Author Reply: Thank you for another wonderful review! Things are winding up a bit, yes, but there's more action to be had before all are safe and sound. Poor Laleth's fate was one of the last things I decided when plotting this story. I'm glad she drew you in. Thanks so much for the wonderful encouragement.
-Brennan

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/7/2009
Perhaps two are now saved, if badly damaged.

I hope they find this Herumor--I find I don't like him!

Author Reply: Perhaps . . .
You don't like Herumor? Can't imagine why not . . . ;)
The next chapter will be up tomorrow. In it, things will get better . . . and worse. And that's all I'm saying now.
Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! I hope you keep reading.
-Brennan

JancyReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/4/2009
Wow, so many good stories today.

I havent read much Gilraen stories. This one has a nice suspense to it.



Author Reply: Thanks for the lovely review! I've read a few stories by different authors featuring Gilraen. For this one, I tried to mix external action with emotional tension. There are only a few chaps left in this tale, so I hope you enjoy where it goes.
-Brennan

ElentarriReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/3/2009
Lovely story. A nice original take on this part of Tolkien's work. The writing is also nice and clean. Please update very soon :-)

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Author Reply: Thanks for the wonderful review! I'm glad you're enjoying this tale. The next chapter should be posted within the next day or so.
-Brennan

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/2/2009
Poor Gilraen.I hope she does find the safety of Rivendell.

Author Reply: Yes, things are looking quite bleak for her at the moment. I will say, though, that this is *not* AU. More should be up soon. I hope you keep reading!
-Brennan

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