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On the Wings of the Storm  by Lialathuveril 5 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/10/2009
Ah! Suitably erotic for this night of all nights! Love the "rescue" and the pillow fight. I have a feeling the servants will be suitably impressed and delighted, actually.

A proper wedding night for these two!

Author Reply: Hello Larner,
lol, you might be right about the servants! And I wanted to show how they have trust and laughter between them, a good foundation for their marriage, I hope.

Lia

CuthalionReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/10/2009
Lovely, romantic and delightfully sensual. Bravo.

Mona

Author Reply: Hello Mona,
I felt I had to make it up to them for all the trouble I threw at them in the earlier chapters ;-)

Lia

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/9/2009
Another delightfully romantic chapter. I just love the custom of the bridal staff. What a sweet start to their married life--I especially enjoyed the references you made about their first few days together--the wet nightgown, etc. I feel a bit sad though because the story is about to end but also excited that another one might start too?

Author Reply: Hello Whitewave,
I had fun coming up with all these customs (although some of them, like the 'putting to bed', I just borrowed). And it seemed natural that they would look back to the start of their relationship and what attracted them to each other.

As for another story - I have got ideas for that, but it might not involve Eomer and Lothiriel.

Lia

GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/9/2009
*Sigh* If only there were such a man, eh? Truly a pleasure to read, I like the idea of the ribbons, maybe I'll find a way to work that into a poem or something, it's pretty. Very creative, I loved the pillow fight, I laughed right along with them! I hope you have a great week!

Author Reply: Hello Galimeril,
feel free to use the idea of the ribbons. I got the idea from a Swedish midsummer custom, where people dance around a maypole and twine long ribbons around it. And I'm pleased that you liked the pillow fight!

Have a great week, too!
Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 30 on 2/9/2009
A delightful chapter.I'm glad they are married at last and have survived the ordeal of the ceremony.I love Eomer's thoughtfulness.May their soon be an heir for Rohan!

Author Reply: Hello Linda,
I know it was a bit of an ordeal for Lothiriel, but I hope that Eomer has made it up to her. And we'll find out in the next chapter if all those ribbons worked ;-)

Lia

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