| A Walk to Remember by LOTRFaith | 2 Review(s) |
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/14/2003 |
| What a nice opening chapter. Lots of detail and very interesting characters with intriguing relationships to one another. You've also got your readers wondering about the dangers into which Legolas and, for me, Thalion, are riding. I look forward to more. |
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| Aly | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/14/2003 |
| This is a really nice start! I can't wait to see where you take the story. Only suggestion is to watch the small grammer things (of instead of if or things like that). Hope you'll be able to update sooner then you think. :) |
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