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Elanor's Story  by PipMer 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/20/2009
No wonder Merry was crying--I wouldn't blame him at all! Poor lad!

And Pippin continues on as the beloved Pippin we know and love, as always concerned for those he loves!

Wonderful details!

Author Reply: Thank you Larner, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Pippin is a doll, isn't he? Always thinking of others before himself; that's one of the things that I love about him.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/20/2009
Oh, I can understand very well why Merry wished that this dream would never end!
It was wonderfully described with the sensations coming one after another, and then fading away again when Merry woke up.

Let's hope that Pippin's sneaking abilities are better than he believes. Strider might know how to cure Merry's heart. Or so I hope...

Author Reply: Thank you, Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Descriptions are hard for me to do, so I'm glad that it came across like it did... I must have done my job right :)


shireboundReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/20/2009
Poor Merry! His grief is so fresh and sharp. *hugs him*

Author Reply: Yes, it certainly is. It will get better, though.

Thank you for reading!

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