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| Drummer by Lady Bluejay | 4 Review(s) |
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| EStrunk | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/8/2011 |
| Little Alphros comes off as a real kid, blunt, headstrong. The banter with him was fun. I love watching Amroth try to figure out how to handle a girl who is not one of his widows. And what will he do now that she is going back to the mountains? | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/13/2009 |
| Oh my, I think Amroth is smitten though he probably doesn't know it yet. I like their romantic boat ride and Alphros's presence just adds more to it! The first kiss scene was so romantic. | |
| LBJ | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/6/2009 |
| Review deleted because of formatting problems but Radbrooks wrote:- Another very enjoyable chapter. I love the 'dance' the two of them are doing and how she doesn't quite trust Amroth as he obviously has a reputation, or perhaps it's just a caution she would have with any young man. I loved it when he 'pulled rank' with her cousin - that was priceless. Anyway, I like the fact that it's not total trust from the very first day as that would not be realistic. By the way, there is something the matter with the formatting on the last 1/4 of the chapter today. It was fine yesterday when I first read the chapter but today the text in that section shows it all as that strike-through font. Maybe it's just my computer but I thought I should let you know! :) | |
| LBJ | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/6/2009 |
| Review deleted because of formatting problems but Fantasia wrote:- I like this story; I really like all your stories. I feel so sorry for Devoran, to lost all her love ones because the war and to become what it seems a burden to her father's heir. I mean, for being the Lord's daughter to be the non-wanted relation to her cousin and wife, what a sad fate, mainly because her cousin is the one taking advance of the peace and have done nothing to deserve it. It is cruel that females didn't inherent in Gondor. I hope that she has the most beautiful love story with Amroth, she will become a lady of a royal house, with a good income and recognition, I suppose even if he is a third son, at least, she is Lothiriel size, so she can wears her dresses. I realize now that the story is named after her dog, we will have to wait to know why. Thanks you | |