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Jay's Drabblets II  by Jay of Lasgalen 4 Review(s)
harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 16 on 8/15/2011
Very evocative. Lovely word picture.

KittyReviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/10/2009
That place wasn’t the most comfortable one, but the landscape and the form of the rocks must have been quite interesting.

Author Reply: I think it was bleak and barren, but still beautiful in its way.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 16 on 5/30/2009
A beautiful descriptive vignette, Jay. Excellent imagery!

Author Reply: Thank you. I imagined the pass as bleak but still beautiful.

ellieReviewed Chapter: 16 on 5/29/2009
very cleverly done!

Author Reply: Thank you! 'Z' was hard. Zirak-zigil was easy, but the final word was much harder to find!

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