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Redheredh's Potted Plots by Redheredh	8 Review(s)
grumpy	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/3/2009
I ment to write quite some time back to tell you how much I liked this story. Aragorn thoughts and actions after the leave taking of Celeborn and Galadriel, and seen by one of his rangers, was just wonderful to read. Soory it took me so long to get back to you. Author Reply: Hey, a review is always welcome, anytime! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Kitt Otter	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/21/2009
Elven in-laws must be freaky, no question. I like your Aragorn. He’s very much the King and Ranger, “his long legs crookedly stretched out before him”. His moods between sulk and mirth were shown crisply well too. And he’s actually promised to cut down on the pipe-weed??? The perspective here was different – for fanfiction in general, though it’s your forte – that Celeborn was one to respect, that his words were something to treasure, rare as they were. (It makes me think now that Galadriel does too talking. :P) The parallels you draw between Boromir and Celeborn’s leadership and Aragorn and Celeborn’s ah, what is the word, princeliness? Hmm. Well, for one, how the both managed to marry Elven Princesess seemingly above them. Rámon was sweet. His humor, loyalty and curiosity were just what melancholy!Aragorn needed. I liked how defensive and warm he felt about Boromir. My earlier comment was a bit hasty. Elven in-laws can be great if you have the time to think over what they say. (Or maybe Aragorn’s problem here was thinking too hard…?) Thanks for this study of Celeborn. I’ll have to look more closely at what he says from now on. ^_^ Author Reply: G I am very glad you like Aragorn in this. I actually do think he would cut back on the smoking at Arwen's request. Especially if she mentioned it would not be acceptable around their children. "your forte - " Thank you, I shall take that as a compliment! And Galadriel does get flowery on occasion and tries to make nice between parties - just as any good queen should. That was one of their most important duties in medieval times. When it came to the brothers, Boromir was necessary for Ramon's reference, but Faramir was always mine. For one, just the reason you point out yourself. But of course, if one can see the congruity Faramir has with Aragorn, then it is no leap to see that same congruity between Aragorn and Celeborn. I now see Celeborn as a royal prince (unlike Elrond as the royal lord of Imladris - ringbearer or no) representing the actual pattern Aragorn is being shaped upon. Denethor and Theoden could not be used in the same way, except as contrast. For in the LOTR, the long defeat had already taken a terrible toll on them that would lead to their demise. Aragorn had to win. Although, he is still mortal and must face loss and death at the end of his own reign. There are other aspects of Celeborn's behaviour that both Faramir and Aragorn also affect in the story, if one looks. You describe Ramon, friend to his lords, very well. I think you and Ramon are right in saying Aragorn was thinking too hard. Look where it got him, at least temporarily... ;) Celeborn does not have a lot of scenes in the story. Nonetheless, he is there as certainly as are Arwen and Thranduil(wordless except through Legolas). Thank you very much for the kind review. They are always appreciated.

perelleth	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/15/2009
OK, I'm back. First i loved the setting, the courtly environment around Aragorn -already Elessar, and he has made good, valuable friends back at court... the whole character study through the POV of a Gondorian knight is a great idea. Also loved the details: the pavillion, the assistant, the trust and closeness implied between the king and Rámon, revealed by how the attendants know how to deal with him and when to leave them alone... and Aragorn feeling comfortable in his role as a king, with the protocol and the signs of status and all that. THen, studying Celeborn's personality through the musings of Aragorn is quite revealing, of the amount of reflection he has always put into his life, eager to learn all that could be of use to him, and also of the Sindarin Lord. A master of prevention, a master plotter, showing, guiding, creating the frame for things to happen and if they do not, then there is an alternate plan then makes only sense, not just with the Celeborn you've been creating but also wit what we know of the character. And Aragorn's interpretation of the exchange between Celeborn and Boromir about Fangorn had me fangirling Celeborn and just wanting to go back to re read, because explained by Aragorn it gains a new angle! And I really loved that Aragorn was capable of perceiving an gauging to what point Celeborn and Galadriel are a perfect match for each other and how deeply they love and respect each other. ANd that he sees that as a model for his own marriage. And... well, everything in it, did I already say that? Thank you very much again. I still owe you a council. It will be coming, I promise. Author Reply: Oh dear! I beg pardon for not acknowledging this second review until now! Thank you for expanding your earlier comments on this tale. :) More thanks for saying it added? to your enjoyment of Tolkien's story. And I look forward to a White Council meeting of any sort you might have in mind! :D

Larner	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/8/2009
I love this look at Celeborn through Aragorn's eyes. How anyone can underrate Celeborn is more than I can understand. Author Reply: Glad you liked it! And I totally agree!! Thanks for the review!

daw the minstrel	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/8/2009
I'd never thought about the meaning the Galadriel's and Celeborn's parting words, but this was very insightful about them and about Celeborn too. Author Reply: Well, maybe this was carried out a little farther than the Professor's actual thoughts about the meaning of their words. But, this is a multi-layered work of genius and, as he intended, very applicable. Apparantly, even by its own characters. ;D Thank you for the review!

ellie	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/8/2009
How delightful and full of wonderful insights into well-respected characters! well done! Author Reply: Thank you, Ellie! And thanks for the review!

perelleth	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/8/2009
OK, I'm officially blown away by this. Have to re read, above all the last part, to be coherent, but, hey, you've been picking up inspiration from the very same place i have been looking for elinghtenment, so there are many things here I really needed to remember! The present, then, is doubly appreciated. Loved this:"Fate is too strong a force to oppose. But, the natural flow of history cannot be easily diverted from its course either. Every design requires wise engineering to succeed." I'll return later, with more reflection. Thank you very much Author Reply: Happy Birthday, Perelleth!! :D I look forward to your further comments. Oh yes... You are very welcome!

illereyn	Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/7/2009
Wow! There's a lot of thought put into this - you certainly made me pay a lot more attention to those two sentences spoken by Galadriel and Celeborn! And I'm glad Celeborn's character gets a clarification and vindication here - he's so often dismissed. Author Reply: g Thank you! Pleased that you liked it. :) Yes, I am a shameless fan-gurl for the Elmoi and especially Celeborn. Thank you for reviewing!

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