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Sulwing of MirkwoodReviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/15/2009
O.o

...oops...

...um...

...little help, please? someone? it looks like they'll be dinner this time. and there i got all excited that they were together again. :(

...please don't kill them...surely legolas has suffered enough today

p.s. decaying stuff on the snake's teeth...ew

Author Reply: I think our guys are alone, no help coming. Unless, of course, you consider the author help. :o) Excitement comes in many forms, good and bad, but they are together, which has to be a good thing.

Legolas probably has suffered enough, but that may not make a difference. We'll have to see how it goes.

I thought of Kimodo dragons when I wrote that part, because their saliva is septic due to diet and not from venom. Ew is right.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 12 on 10/10/2009
Good--Ranger and Elf connect, and Ranger bids fair to escape with wounded friend. Now, to make certain the snake doesn't capture them again!

Author Reply: Finally. That's the plan, but when have you known those two to have a plan work out the way they originally hope it will? It may take several plans, since I'm sure my plot bunny has plans of his own.

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