Face of the Enemy by Linaewen | 2 Review(s) |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/22/2011 |
I rejoice she has so good a chaperone. And the Wicked sounds as if he has earned his title honestly enough! |
|
Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/11/2010 |
Akhbaas seems a little too sure of himself as far as I am concerned. That could very well lead to his undoing. (One can only hope.) I like the way you've brought the Southrons into your story. It gives an insite as to where they might be coming from. I hope Heera survives the battle, although the innocent always suffer the most. |
|