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| Bait by Legorfilinde | 2 Review(s) |
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| Ana | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/24/2004 |
| Hi Lef: (Silly me, I finally found were to post a review!) Many compliments on your ability and understanding of the characters. You are able to handle many narrative threads at once and not rush the development. Your OFC is such a well drawn baddie, love to hate her and get angst-y over her knowledge of elvish vulnerability. Action build up works in stages... enjoy how you let us see things from different POV and get the internal messages w/o lots of explanation. Other characters are also easily belived and well portrayed. Poor Leggy is tested to the max, he is not invulnerable super elf, and we love him the more for it. You do have a gift for putting us ( and him) in a painful place and finding the resolution with grace. Well done!!! Thanks again for sharing, and now I can check out your other wonderful fics! Blessings, ANA | |
| Aloysius | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/6/2004 |
| You really like to put Legolas through the wringer, don't you? :o) Great atmosphere, clever plot, good pace, very exciting - and Thuringwethil is a brilliant creation. Alo | |