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In the Stillness  by Avon 3 Review(s)
Estel_Mi_OlorReviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/14/2005
Me again-from reading other people's reviews I realize that it was Legolas and Aragorn. I was so completely caught up in the emotion that I didn't even realize the "he" clues in there. Nice work.

Estel_Mi_OlorReviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 10/14/2005
So beautiful, Avon. Arwen at Aragorn's death? Dialogue would have detracted from this beautiful image, this web of feelings that are so real to the reader. I am deeply moved.

LKKReviewed Chapter: Author's Notes on 9/19/2003
Very beautiful. Nicely written. I liked the style you chose to write the scene in. It added to the pathos. Well done, Avon. :-)

LKK

Author Reply: Thanks, LKK. It did start out as more or less a writing exercise but I think it worked. (hope so anyway) ;-)

Avon

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