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Journey out of Darkness  by Armariel 2 Review(s)
AntaneReviewed Chapter: 37 on 4/25/2010
So Serilinn is planning the Mordor Extreme Makeover, huh? Good for her and indeed Sam would not recognize the place. I like her optimism and determination.
You go, girl!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)



Author Reply: Mordor Extreme Makeover? LOLOL! Yeah, guess she thinks she's going to turn it into paradise overnight...these kids, gotta love 'em.....:) But I dare say she has the makings of a natural leader and organizer.

Well, maybe Sam could even have a hand in it...it's a thought. If only Frodo could see it. Too bad cameras weren't invented yet. Or airplanes. Or computers.........

Thanks again for commenting Antane!

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LarnerReviewed Chapter: 37 on 4/24/2010
Your skill with blankverse has continued to grow! Delightful!

Author Reply: Why, thank you:).....well, I'd thought Greenjade's song was far from being my best writing, but I figured since he was improvising, it might be better if it were somewhat unpolished. Guess he's inherited some of his mother's poetic gift, what? It's actually been a while since I've written a serious poem. Ought to get back into that. Haven't I been considering writing one for Gimli lately? Hmmm.....

Well, now they're on the road again...let's just see what happens next! As always Larner, your feedback is much appreciated, and helpful.

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