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The Wizard and the Ranger by Gandalfs apprentice | 7 Review(s) |
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Darkover | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/2/2011 |
Dear G.A.: A very good "first meeting" story. The dialogue was quite good, and both Aragorn and Gandalf sound in-character. I enjoyed reading this; thanks for writing and posting it. Sincerely, Darkover | |
Estelcontar | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/31/2010 |
This is a most amusing story. I love the humour of it. Gandalf sounds very Gandalvish, and I most certainly can see Aragorn rather preferring to spend a couple of days in jail than risking to wound or kill a couple of foolish, but innocent people. I like your explanation for Thorongil too. Very ingenious. Author Reply: Regarding Thorongil: Tolkien doesn't say whether Aragorn came up with the name himself, or other people named him so. Obviously this version is one that Aragorn kept to himself. But I like the idea of his choosing a name for himself based on his parents. Thanks for reading! G.A. | |
Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/31/2010 |
Loved the characterization of Gandalf here; and the vision of poor Aragorn stuck in a jail cell in Bree being lectured by a hobbit is tragic and rather funny at the same time. A wonderful version of their first meeting! Author Reply: Hi Raksha I've had this tale in the hopper for years now--originally it was going to be the end of "The Sword of Elendil," but it no longer fit the story by the time I got there. Different mood! Gandalf the Grey is a lot of fun to write when he's showing his sense of humor. I'm relatively less interested in Gandalf the White. Thanks for reading! G.A. | |
Lady Bluejay | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/31/2010 |
This is good - I too commend you on the reasoning of the name. So obvious when someone points it out. I am interested to know if Aragorn's naval apprenticeship was canon or GA lore?LBJ Author Reply: It's GAlore. But kind of like the name, I think--obvious when you think about it. How else would he have learned the shipcraft he needed to sail against the corsairs in Gondor? G.A. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/30/2010 |
Nice beginning here. May get to The Sword of Elendil one day, when I get more of my own things finished! Heh! Author Reply: Hi Larner Thanks for reviewing! G.A. | |
eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/30/2010 |
Interesting tale, thought I hate to think of Aragorn with a criminal record in Bree. This is the first time I've encountered that particular explanation for the name "Thorongil." Kudos! "Thingol of Rohan" -- Thengel, perhaps? Author Reply: Thanks for the catch. What an embarrassing error! I don't think the Bree courts keep very good records on mysterious strangers. Thanks for reviewing! G.A. | |
shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/30/2010 |
crafted from my father’s name and my mother’s too How clever! This is a very entertaining story. Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. G.A. | |