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Rise Again From Ashes  by Independence1776 3 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/8/2010
I had friends, though I didn't know if any would be willing to talk to me. I closed my eyes and sighed. Especially Telepevola, who had been my closest friend for years. Why would he want to have anything to do with me? After all, I had killed him on the quays of Alqualondë.

Oh, that's got to hurt. How awful for Telepevola, and yes, for Maglor, even if he was the killer. Hopefully Telepevola will forgive Maglor, or at least be willing to put it behind them after umpteen thousand years. These lines could make a whole separate story; or hopefully be resoved in this one.

Author Reply: It's definitely horrible. As for the rest: *bites tongue*

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/27/2010
I am enjoying this story very much. I am fascinated, not just by the way in which Maglor is going to have to cope with this new life (I am not surprised that some Sindar members of the household are going to make his life difficult), but with the way you have envisaged a developing technology for the Elves.

I look forward to reading more of it.

Author Reply: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I couldn't see this being set twelve thousand years after the end of the First Age, and not have the Elves with a higher tech level. Yeah, there's a bunch of politics dealing with his return. To me, that's the fun stuff.

I hope you continue to like it!

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/26/2010
This is a very interesting story. I am following carefully and enjoy the new chapters. I am not particularly knowledgeable about Maglor, but think I will enjoy your analysis. Thank you.

Author Reply: I'm sorry for not replying earlier. I've been busy. (That's why I wanted to finish the story before posting, so I wouldn't have to keep people waiting for the next update.)

I'm glad you're reading this, especially because you don't know much about Maglor. That's one of the best things about fanfic, that you can read about characters you don't know much about.

I'm glad you find it interesting.

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