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By The Hands of Another  by Estelle 3 Review(s)
Lady JainaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/17/2003
Great job so far. This is as far as I got today, but perhaps I will be able to finish soon! I love the angst! Excellent work!

Author Reply: Ohhh, I hope you got to read more! :D And I hope you liked the rest of the chapters too :) *bows low* Thank you :)

NikaraReviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/23/2003
All right, I'll give you the no cliffie. But I still want to read more! Keep going.

Author Reply: Yes! Nooo cliffie for now and no additional pain for a couple of chapters LOL!!

LKKReviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/23/2003
*deep breath*
Do I feel relaxed any? Nope. I'll have to try again later.
A child, eh? Abolutely not what I was expecting to come out of that bush, I'll admit. I liked that the first paragraph was from his POV; it added to the suspense since I couldn't tell what sort of creature was hiding. Nice touch that Varil thought Aragorn was attacking Legolas. And Varil's reaction on seeing Legolas up close was priceless. "He has funny ears... What is he?" It's a good thing Legolas is ill; otherwise, he might have had some choice words to say. In elvish, of course, so as not to corrupt young ears. ;-)

A short chapter, but a nice one. :-)

LKK

Author Reply: You should relax while you still can! Things should calm down a little in the next couple of chapters but the ride will get a little bumpy after that and if I were you, I will not be holding my breath. LOL!

I'm happy to know that you liked the child's reaction on seeing Legolas. I have no doubt that Legolas would sit and tell him all about elves if he had the strength. Varil would regret asking that question and would remember this lesson for a very very long time. LOL!

The next chapter will be up in a few minutes and I promise it'll be a little longer and nooo evil cliffie. :D

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