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| A Hawk and a Star by Mirach | 3 Review(s) |
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| Mereth | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/17/2010 |
| Aaargh, another cliffhanger... What will they do now? A huge thank you for the graphics. It is fascinating to actually see the dead Trees or to build up the almost surrealistic scene of Eonwe and Earendil being left in an emptiness of grey light. The imagery here is splendid. Author Reply: This story is a row of cliffhangers, but I can assure you that we are almost art their end already ;) Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked the imagery! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/15/2010 |
| Blinded? Alas! But I do have friends who sail alone in spite of blindness.... Author Reply: Oh, really? I can only imagine how it must feel like. Tell them they have my deepest respect! | |
| AzureSkye | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/15/2010 |
| YAY, New chapter!! Wow. Blind. I really didn't see that one coming. 'course I realized earlier that he didn't have that super vision he supposedly has, so I was wondering about that. My question is, how exhausted is Eonwe right now? He was already tired, the he was Singing for hours, and I can't imagine that was easy. :) do we get to see him collapse? And where's the Silmaril, Elwing's there, but there's no mention of it....Any way, great chapter, and I can't wait for the rebuilding of Vingilot! I wonder what people on Middle Earth are thinking, as Gil-estel has disappeared. Hmm...I don't know if you'll work that in, but now I'm curious...... Author Reply: Ah yes... to give him a super vision, you need to take the normal one away first, don't you? ;) Well, we will see about that... Um... You do sound as if you would like to see Eonwe collapse ;) I have to write the next chapter yet, so I don't know myself what exactly will happen. I think Manwe is quite worried for him by now... The Silmaril is there, but the flower of Telperion is brighter, so it is not that noticeable. And I was also wondering what the poeple in Middle-earth are thinking. I'm sure Elrond and Elros are worried for their father, and wondering what happened. Thank you for the review! | |