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| In Darkness Bound by Fiondil | 4 Review(s) |
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| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 99 on 8/26/2011 |
| I sure hope Ingwion doesn't travel too far before he finds out that his family is free. That shoud be a joyous reunion. Author Reply: Hi Tari. Actually, this chapter takes place at an earlier time for Ingwion. At this time, Vanyamar is still under Ingoldo's control. It's a bit confusing as I'm jumping back and forth to tell different characters' stories and bringing them all up to the 'present' which is with Arafinwe listening to Manwe tell him what has been happening in Eldamar while he's been with the Valar. Eventually, the different threads will be joined but not immmediately. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 99 on 8/22/2011 |
| At least they have good warning and a good plan to follow. Wonderful. Author Reply: Yes, they do, Larner, and we'll see how it works out. Thanks for reading and reviewing. | |
| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 99 on 8/20/2011 |
| So, Ingoldo still has the upper hand in this one, hence the search. I hope they can hide long enough. I have the feeling that Ingalaure's move to stop Ingoldo comes just at the right time. On the other hand, these guards got their orders a while ago. As long as they don't get different orders they will search. This game of hide and seek better work. Author Reply: Hi obsidianj. At this point in time (and we've been going back and forth) Ingoldo still rules in Vanyamar. Ingalaurė has not yet taken over. In the meantime, Ignwion and his friends are still in danger of being discovered. We'll see how they fare in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. | |
| 6336 | Reviewed Chapter: 99 on 8/12/2011 |
| Well things are finally starting to come together, and the Valar are starting to help, just a little. I like the way Ingalaure thinks, finding out who is loyal and who isn't is a good start to repair the damage Ratty has done. Looks like Ingwion and company are on the run, again! Waiting till Monday, Huggs, Lynda Author Reply: Hi Lynda. Yes, things are beginning to come together. Very soon all the various plot threads will coalesce into a single story again. We'll see how Ingwion and his group fare soon enough. They're not out of the woods yet, but they have allies who will help them. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. | |