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In Darkness Bound  by Fiondil 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 104 on 8/29/2011
About time Arafinwe arrived! Now, to get cracking! And I don't blame Ingwion for his concern for his brother! There will be an entire contingent wanting Ingoldo's punishment before all is done.

Author Reply: You bet, Larner! LOL! And I'm afraid that everyone will have to take a number behind Ingwion as far as Ingoldo is concerned. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it very much.

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 104 on 8/29/2011
Finally, it is time for Arafinwë to take over, it is time to start to kicking .....well, you know. I feel so sorry for Ingwion, waiting is so hard, more when do you know that action is needed and you are helpless

In reality, I feel sorry for everybody, from Feanor to Lindarion, what a terrible time; the sequels of Melkor's job are terrifying. It is a long, but a long way for recovery. Feanor was such a talented elf, and all was lost in his rage. I even fell sorry for Olwe's daughter and Ingwion, they could not even start to court for centuries. So many things destroyed and so many things delayed. I hope that after a while, everybody, from Valars to the last elf can start to analyze what went wrong.

I remember that I read a fic time ago, about Olwe, the Teleris and Elwing, how she told them about the Noldors, their heroism, after all, she was marry to a descendent of one of them, and how the Teleri started to see them in another light. I would really love to see one story from you about the event, I'm sure that it will be great (Do you have a whising list?:))


Author Reply: Hi Fantasia. Now that Arafinwë has arrived, thing should start hopping. And waiting is indeed hard and some take it harder than others as we see with Ingwion.

It is right to feel sorry for them all, for as Manwë pointed out in an earlier chapter, they are all suffering to one degree or another and none are unaffected by what has happened. And while it is a shame that such things as Ingwion and Olwë's romance being put on hold, we do know that eventually they do marry and that's the important thing to remember.

I don't have any immediate intention of writing about Elwing persuading the Teleri about the Noldor but I can add it to my plot bunny list and perhaps someday I will feel inspired to write about it. Thanks for the suggestion and thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much.

6336Reviewed Chapter: 104 on 8/29/2011
Not sure I like these dreams Ingwion is having, he is either having prophetic(Sp?) dreams or Irmo or Namo or Atar is trying to prepare him for what is to come. I really, really, really do not like Ratty!

Ingwe may not be at the hunting lodge, but I still think it needs checking out, with the amouint of traffic that seems to have been coming and going there, something is going on!

I can understand how Ingwion feels, but killing off brain cells with alchol is not going to help, he will need all his wits about him when he finally finds his atar and what Ratty has been upto.

Yay! Arafinwe is finally here, now things will start to happen. The train wreck is on the home stretch.

Hope you did not get too wet and that your brother was O.K. N.Y.C. did the right thing with regard to Irene, it could have been a lot worse.

Huggs,
Lynda

Author Reply: Hi Lynda. The dreams are certainly troubling. We'll see what they decide to do about the hunting lodge soon enough. And Ingwion really needs to grow up a bit more. Right now everything is centered around him. He will shortly learn that others have had it rougher than he has of late.

And yes, now that Arafinwë has arrived, things will start rolling.

We had an all-day rain yesterday that was slow and steady. I didn't go out. My brother said Irene was a non-event in NYC. He woke up on Sunday to find all the streets dry. I guess it was much worse in Vermont. They reall got hit.

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much.

AzureSkyeReviewed Chapter: 104 on 8/29/2011
Oh, Arafinwe's last line was amazing. After all the waiting those two have done....Well, lets see what Arafinwe can add to this Hunt. :) Although I may not be reviewing faithfully, I am reading, and its wonderful as everything else you write. I'll try to review more, but know that I'm always looking forward to the days you update!

Author Reply: Hi AzureSkye. I'm glad you found Arafinwë's last line amazing. We will be seeing a new and improved Arafinwë in the rest of the story. He's no longer the sniveling self-pitying whiner he was before, thank Eru! LOL! Anyway, I'm glad you are still reading and I look forward to any review you are able to leave. Thanks.

bookwormReviewed Chapter: 104 on 8/29/2011
lol and suddenly!Arafinwe! XD Poor Ingwion though, you can just see him slowly coming to pieces.

Author Reply: That's right, bookworm. And you have to feel sorry for Ingwion. Nothing seems to be going right for him lately. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

SunnyReviewed Chapter: 104 on 8/29/2011
On to the hunt!

I'll enjoy seeing Ingoldo getting what he deserves - though that is actually some way off, I'll expect.
I suppose those dreams Ingwion is suffering from are precognitive dreams? From your description, they have that sort of feel to them.

Author Reply: Hi Sunny. Yes, the Hunt is about to begin at last. And the dreams are probably precognitive in nature, but as Ingwion really doesn't remember them, it's hard to say. Some of them may just be anxiety dreams. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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