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Spectrums by Eärillë | 1 Review(s) |
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Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 1/31/2011 |
If only they had indeed rebelled so--perhaps they would not each have died so ignomiously! Author Reply: Indeed, but true tales don't always have a happy ending -- sadly. -- And I'm... relieved, that it didn't sound too dramatic to you. Someone I asked to beta-read this piece said the ending was too dramatic. Well, if you are rethinking it again, I would be quite glad to receive a second opinion on this. (My own opinion doesn't count, since I'm the author. :)) Thanks for the comments nonetheless! And you, again, managed to incite some plot-bunnies into my head unwittingly... Rey | |