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In Deep Water  by Avon 2 Review(s)
Nienna ElanesseReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/26/2004
I never know when I'll be called away, so I'll write this quickly.

Do you need more praise from me? ;) While I'm in Boromir's place as the eldest, I do understand why Faramir doesn't relax enough to get water in his ears! lol.


Antigone_QReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/22/2003
I loved this. Your descriptions of the river (sun, dragonflies, and all) and the boys were so vivid, and I think you got the characters exactly right.

Author Reply: Thanks, Antigone! This was only about my second LOTR story so I think there was a fair bit of luck involved in getting the characters right so I'm pleased to hear that you think they worked.

Thanks,

Avon

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