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| Pebbles From Arda by Virtuella | 9 Review(s) |
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| spinster | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/15/2015 |
| A very touching and beautifully written piece. Thank you Author Reply: Thank you! I'm rather proud of this little piece, so I'm glad you liked it. | |
| Darkover | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/19/2011 |
| Dear Virtuella: This is a wonderful story, beautiful in the descriptions and imagery you have employed, and quite emotional, too. It is almost poetic, and you write your descriptions of Faramir's life--especially his love and his future of and with Eowyn. Thank you for writing and posting this fine story. Sincerely, Darkover Author Reply: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the poetry of the piece. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 9/17/2011 |
| A beautiful birthday piece; each paragraph an echo. Finduilas cast a long shadow, preserved in the tides and seas and waters and the sea lavender and the blood of her sons, one that lingers into the Fourth Age. The language and descriptions are exquisite; and I love the connection between Boromir and Eowyn. The title is perfect, too! Author Reply: Thank you, and thank you for your editorial advice! | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 9/16/2011 |
| Thank you so much! This was such a lovely story and a wonderful surprise.It is so poetic and thought provoking and a perfect companion for the story you wrote me about Aragorn. Author Reply: Thank you, I'm so glad you're happy with this. :) | |
| Ellynn | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 9/15/2011 |
| Awww, this is so beautiful! :) It's hard to choose, but I think I like most the last one. You did a great job, dear. It is a wonderful birthday present and I'm sure Linda will love it. Author Reply: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 9/14/2011 |
| What a beautiful gift for our Linda! Definitely perfect! I so rejoice that you have written this, and love the likeness to Boromir he finds in his White Lady! How beautiful! Faramir has all of this to remember and even rejoice for! Author Reply: Thank you, I do so like a happy ending. :) | |
| eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 9/14/2011 |
| Excellent choices for the seven letters, and a perfect progression of images for Faramir's tale. Author Reply: Thanks you, I was amazed how easily the letters fitted! | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 9/14/2011 |
| this secret kinship of colours This is a beautifully written -- and woven -- series of scenes. Author Reply: Thanks, you're right, it rather felt like weaving. | |
| Annawen Ereiniel | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 9/14/2011 |
| Virtuella, you've brought me out of lurkerdom to say that this is one of the most fantastic pieces I've read in a while. Your lyrical style creates images of great beauty, and I appreciate very much the technical difficulty of what you've accomplished, the intricacy of the echo words weaving the threads of a favorite character's life together and keeping a seamless cohesion among the paragraphs. Well done. Virtuella, you are truly a virtuoso! Anyone would be honored by such a birthday gift. Author Reply: Thank you, I am flattered that this has lured you out of lurkdom! ;-) | |