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| The Rebel by Lindelea | 10 Review(s) |
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| Imhiriel | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/5/2006 |
| Very intense story. I think the transitions between the present time and the memories of the past are very well done, with the little details that trigger specific recollections. And I like the chapter openings, showing Freddy's changing perception of himself. It's nice to read of these events from this new PoV after the account in "A Small and Passing Thing". Author Reply: I don't remember seeing this review before, and so I belatedly thank you for taking the time to leave a good word. Thanks! | |
| Nienor Niniel | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/28/2006 |
| Nice to see something about Fatty's heroism! I especially like how this is interwoven with memories of the time before the quest. And the way the captive hobbits care for each other is impressive. As for Lobelia - I have never seen such a likeable version of her in fic, but it works out with very well what we know about her behaviour in those times. I can understand, though, that she frightened the ruffians. Saruman was just creepy, as he should be. Greetings! Nienor Author Reply: Hah, have found yet another of your reviews! (Amazing, either my email wasn't working well when you were reading these, or SoA wasn't sending out alerts, or something!) Thanks! | |
| Cuthalion | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/30/2005 |
| *grins* I guess I deserve this after letting you wait so incredibly long for the translation of There and back again... But The Rebel has definetely moved up, and I guess I will refer to it when I write about the time of the troubles in the Shire... for there will be some wounded hobbits from Nr. Fredegar's rebels, appearing in a later chapter of my Lily-tale (if you allow...) *hugs* Cúthalion Author Reply: Hurrah! I wondered if perhaps there was a clamour for something else that moved it in front--such things happen. And I would be honoured if you wish to use some of "my" hobbits in your story! What fun! Thanks. Author Reply: Did you post those chapters of your Lily tale? I don't remember seeing them, but then I spent a long time when I wasn't reading fanfic, due to illness and time pressures. If you did write and post them, could you let me know and give me a link? Thanks! | |
| Cuthalion | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/30/2005 |
| Oh... and before I forget: The rebel has moved on my translation list! Author Reply: Up, or down? *g* I am quite looking forward to reading it in German! (Makes "Uebung" so much nicer!) | |
| Cuthalion | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 2/21/2005 |
| Marvelous! Absolutely marvelous! I have a soft spot for Freddy, and I simply adore the last chapter and your characterization of Lobelia (Remember the drabble I wrote from one of your first lines?). Imagining her scaring those ruffians is an absolute delight. Brava! Author Reply: Oh, yes, I remember that drabble, it was marvellous! Some day perhaps you'll be able to wade through "A Small and Passing Thing" which is neither small nor passing, but much more Freddy and a lot of Frodo into the bargain. At least my chapters are short! (Even if my stories aren't!) *hugs* | |
| viv | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/20/2004 |
| This is the comment I left for this story in the MEFAwards voting. I'm so glad this story won; it is impressive: The dialogue was stark and uncomfortable, several times making me wince. The torment of imprisonment, contrasted so baldly with those warm and inviting and hobbity flashbacks, evoked all the feelings I think you were going for: horror, anger, emptiness, and furious hope. Gorgeous writing. Author Reply: Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, and to copy the comment here to SoA as well. | |
| trishette | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/21/2004 |
| http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=326 That's my VERY belatedly posted link to the story I have written about Fatty Bolger thus far. Sorry it took so long... several months! | |
| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/1/2003 |
| I would venture to say that was TOO short! It was wonderful! I like how even though it started in the cave you did little flashbacks of life before the ruffians and then some even when there were ruffians in the Shire. It was wonderful and you ended just perfectly. Thank you for such a wonderful story! Author Reply: O lovely, that's what I want to hear, that the story was too short--much better than being told it's TOO long!!! *g* Thank you for the encouraging review! | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 9/29/2003 |
| Oh rats, now you post the updated summary and I see that this is finished. Wow, you certainly had quite a weekend. I will admit to being a wee bit disappointed that there isn't a treasure-trove of secret stories hidden out there, just waiting to be found and plundered. This has a good ending as it stands, but possibly Estella's adventures in Tookland deserve a vignette of their own? Author Reply: You'll be happy to know that a sequel of sorts has popped up. I cannot promise anything, for the outline is not complete, but if the story does not stall, you will hear more of Estella's return from Tookland, and Freddy's recovery. | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 9/29/2003 |
| Ahh, the redemption of Lobelia. Finally, a hobbit with some spunk. It could be viewed as funny: her obstinate cantakerous quarrelsom stubborn nature was so irritating, when what she wanted was Bag End and all she cared about was her family's ease. Now, it is those same traits, when turned toward eaasing the suffering of the unfortunate, that makes all the hobbits (and us) cheer as she is brought out into the light, still clutching her umbrella. It was quite chilling to hear Saruman's voice. Fatty was dying, so I suppose that it's reasonable that he didn't have the strength to resist the Voice. Lobelia wasn't fooled - her strength was wonderful. She managed to do quite a bit of good, before somebody evil enough not to be intimidated silenced her behind boards and nails. Intimidation was enough to keep the hobbits caged in cells with no doors, but not Lobelia. If there's hope for Lobelia, I guess there's hope for the worst of us. It was wonderful that, as she had shown mercy to others, mercy was shown to her. It was good to see familiar faces of the Travelers. You seamlessly wove the familiar narrative from the book with your own details - very skillfully done. Now we need to get Estella back out of the Tookland, and fatten Fredegar up a little. I'll look for the next two chapters in a hour or so, eh? | |