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| Imrahil's Daughters by Lialathuveril | 6 Review(s) |
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| SimplegirlfromLP | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 5/31/2020 |
| I’m hooked. You’re such a great writer , I love that the stories get started right away, no long drawn out exposition or fluff. Down to the action, well in this case the sultry passionate meeting. Author Reply: I too like jumping right into the story. Of course sometimes you need more explanations, but I believe that you can always add these later if the story is sufficiently gripping. | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/24/2012 |
| A very interesting and riveting beginning. I'm looking forward to more. And - I am very glad there was a knock on the door. I'd hate to see Eomer's relationship with Lothiriel ruined by a lack of restraint on both their parts. Emotions were well written. Author Reply: Hello Agape, you've been busy reading - thanks for the reviews! And on hindsight, Eomer will probably be glad of the interruption too, even if he didn't appreciate it at the time ;-) Lia | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/4/2012 |
| Such a treat to find a gripping new story from you. Your Eomer feels very true to life. Thank Goodness the broom fell over before they did something they would forever regret!Wartime leads to many impulses being yielded too, but Eomer and Lothiriel will have something better ahead of them. Author Reply: Saved by a broom so to say ;-) But you know me, before they get to the 'something better ahead of them', they'll have to navigate a few dangerous shoals. However, I hope it will be fun to watch. Lia | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/4/2012 |
| Now, THAT would be quite the way to meet Imrahil's daughter! Heh! Author Reply: They're not slow off the mark, are they ;-) | |
| Radbooks | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/4/2012 |
| This looks like the start to another wonderful story! I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. I'm wondering about the title and if it is an AU with Imrahil having two daughters, or if we are going to see a couple of sides of Lothiriel. It'll be fun watching it play out. :) Thanks for sharing your story! Author Reply: Hello Radbooks, I don't want to give too many secrets away yet, but the next few chapters should make things a bit clearer - at least for the reader ;-) However, the story is not AU. And I'm hoping you'll have as much fun reading the story as I had writing it! Lia | |
| Lossenchristal | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 9/3/2012 |
| Wow! I love all your Eomer/Lothiriel stories, and I can tell right away that this will be another one of my favorites! Excellent prologue! I can't wait for more! :) ~Lossen Author Reply: Thank you, I'm pleased to hear you liked the prologue! And I hope to have another chapter ready for you next week. Lia | |