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| Imrahil's Daughters by Lialathuveril | 7 Review(s) |
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| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/4/2016 |
| I have been captivated by this story from the first chapter and can hardy wait for lunch so I can continue to read. Author Reply: Hi Tari I hope you enjoyed your lunch and the rest of the story! Thanks for reviewing Lia | |
| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/1/2013 |
| Oh, no. Now Eomer helps in creating 2 Lothiriels, although he doesn't know it yet. The plot gets more and more involved. I think in the end nobody can disentangle it anymore. All are involved in either creating more twists or abetting preposterous ideas. Imrahil and, it seems especially, Elphir will throw a fit when they find out. I think Elphir needs a lesson. Letting a friend speak about Lothiriel (and women in general) like that without telling him to take a hike. Author Reply: I actually had some problems myself keeping the plot straight in my mind at all times, it got so convoluted. As for Elphir, he's in for a set-down by Eomer, but you might have reached that bit by now. One of those scenes that are a pleasure to write. Lia | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/4/2012 |
| Oh dear oh dear. She is really messing things up, isn't she? And she is involving others in the mess, too. Shees! As for Eomer - court politics can be horrid. I know he'll be able to overcome his loathing of Gondorian 'small talk' but I hope he can see Lothiriel for what she is. Oh dear oh dear oh dear. Psst - I like the character Gliwen! Author Reply: Hello Agape, a lot of 'oh dears' in there - and I'm afraid it will only get worse, for Lothiriel hasn't finished with digging yet. As for Gliwen, in many ways she's more real than the Lothiriel Eomer has met so far. Glad to hear you like her! Lia | |
| galathil | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/2/2012 |
| Hi Lialathuveril,OH Boy! Me thinks that a certain princess, is digging herself into a deeper and deeper hole. Can.t wait to see how Imrahil reacts, when he finds out whats has being going on.Especially when he finds out that his son and sister where also in on it. Won't even touch a certain King of a certain country when he finds out he!he! Can't wait for the next chapter. LOL Galathil Author Reply: Hi Galathil, she's digging most diligently, isn't she! And her nearest and dearest are doing their best to help her ;-) However, I think there will be a few more plot twists before the truth will out. Thanks for reviewing Lia | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/2/2012 |
| The plot thickens! Another most enjoyable chapter. Author Reply: Hello Linda, thank you and until soon, I hope. Lia | |
| Lyana | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/1/2012 |
| Oh, to be a fly on the wall when she tells Aunt Ivrinial and Amrothos what she's gotten herself into now! Dear oh dear... Author Reply: Hi Lyana, you'll actually get a chance to be that fly in the next chapter... Poor Amrothos! Thanks for reviewing Lia | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/1/2012 |
| And she weaves herself more and more deeply into his awareness, whether she realizes it or not--and he wants her for herself, not for this persona she's trying to project this night! She ought to have fun at the celebrations in town. Author Reply: Hello Larner, I'm hoping that my readers will also have fun at the celebrations in town - there should be some culinary delights coming up ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing Lia | |