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| Sea Flower by Soledad | 2 Review(s) |
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| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/3/2013 |
| What is this minstrel up to? He is a strange character. Minstrels are supposed to know a lot of songs, but this seems to be a bit far out of the ordinary. So, plans are under way to marry Denethor to Ivriniel. But well laid plans and all that... *grin* Author Reply: Exactly. *g* | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/3/2013 |
| Ah... I was wondering when the next chapter would come. A very interesting and quite detailed description of the family dynamics between the Steward and the Prince of Dol Amroth and the history of Pelargir. And that minstrel is surely up to something besides singing ancient lays. By the way, in the conversation between Lorindol, Ecthelion and the Prince of Amroth, his oldest daughter is referred to as "Prince" rather than "Princess" at one point. Unless you're writing slash, I think you need to change this. *grin* Looking forward to the next chapter, Soledad. Author Reply: Thanks. I'll look up the mistake. Next chapter is already written, I'm doing the last touches. And yes, the minstrel is definitely more than what he looks. Thanks for reading and reviewing. | |