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| Dreamflower's Mathoms III by Dreamflower | 3 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/15/2013 |
| Oh, what it has made him do! Poor Deagol, and poor Smeagol as well. Already a slave to the lies told by that soul-trap! Author Reply: It did not take long for Smeagol to fall to the Ring. He was already the sort of creature who thought only of his own desires--and it barely took an instant for the Ring to take over. | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/23/2013 |
| Chilling indeed! But perfectly written, especially the usage of gender (or the lack of it)! Déagol didn't look like himself anymore. It wasn't a real person now. It was just cold flesh. | |
| Virtuella | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/21/2013 |
| Sad and chilling - an excellent vignette! Author Reply: Thank you! It was very chilling and difficult to write! | |