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| Ransom by MP brennan | 7 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/15/2013 |
| I hope this proves Aragorn's ransom in the father's eyes. So, this is what motivated Hakim to become a healer himself? I think he will find his son's ransom will be considered paid, once he sees the new King of Gondor. Author Reply: Indeed, this was kind of a defining moment for Hakim. I hope you enjoy the rest of this story! -Brennan | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/14/2013 |
| Wow! I like the mother. Not that I don't understand the father. The characters voices are perfect. Well done. Author Reply: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the OCs. -Brennan | |
| rs | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/13/2013 |
| "..he seemed almost feral in his intensity." -- What an awesome description of Aragorn in this moment! Something I would like to put on canvas (in my case...paper)! Awesome, awesome, awesome! Very vivid scenes...all of them! I'm actually watching this in my mind. Great job! Author Reply: Thank you so much! I'm so glad the imagery in these scenes is coming through. And if you ever actually put it on canvas, that would kind of make my life. ;) You know I love your artwork. I hope you enjoy the rest of this story! -Brennan | |
| iboneki | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/10/2013 |
| I think I'd probably faint if Aragorn spoke Sindarin to me, too ;) Still loving this. Author Reply: Haha, wouldn't we all! Thanks for reading! -Brennan | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/10/2013 |
| First, I had not expected such a fast update and was thrilled to see a new chapter. What a chapter! My heart was racing first when the dogs attacked and later when the parents came home. Looks like all will be well for a short time, but I am sure you have more problems to come. Thank you. Author Reply: Yes, life is about to get crazy for a few days, so I figured I should get this chap up while I had the chance. I'm glad you appreciated the tension in this chapter. I promise more troubles for the characters in the near future. ;) -Brennan | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/10/2013 |
| This continues to be a wonderful, rich story. Author Reply: Thank you! -Brennan | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/10/2013 |
| What a wonderful chapter! I loved it.You portray Aragorn brilliantly and I love the way he cared for Kali. Author Reply: Thank you! Healer!Aragorn is one of my favorite to write. -Brennan | |