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Ransom  by MP brennan 5 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/23/2013
Well, Nadir and Ghazzan are quite the precious pair, aren't they? And poor Azzam is faced with a catch-22 he can't escape easily--betray the one who saved his daughter and whom he respects, or end up a slave himself, very likely. No wonder he feels anxious--he certainly has reason! Now it's time perhaps for Aragorn to find his way out of there as best he can, and in such a manner that Azzam and his family don't end up being charged with harboring spies.

Author Reply: Indeed, it's a sticky situation all around. I'm glad you enjoyed my latest OCs and their double act. Thanks for reviewing!

-Brennan

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/18/2013
Daleek has really caused a wee problem. Yikes! I understand the need to save the poor kid, but holy Valar!!!

I've got my fingers crossed for all concerned. I do so hope there's a way out that doesn't include selling Aragorn off!

Good tension!

Author Reply: Yes, it's quite the pickle they've gotten themselves into. The next chap should be up in a few days. I hope you enjoy the ride!

-Brennan

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/18/2013
I just love this story!This chapter had me holding my breath.Eagerly awaiting more.

Author Reply: Thank you so much! More in a couple of days, I promise.

-Brennan

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/17/2013
Magnificent chapter. I figured slavers would show up eventually. Your dialogue between all parties wonderfully captured the mess everyone is in. You also left us hanging in Gondor! Update quickly, please! As always, thanks for your hard work.

Author Reply: Thank you! There were a lot of pieces to this chapter, so I'm glad all the dialogue worked in the end--I was worried it might be kind of scattershot. I'll probably update on Monday (assuming I don't perish in the midterm of doom and death and DOOM). Hope you enjoy!

-Brennan

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/17/2013
Oh dear, I'm getting nervous now. *bites nails*

Author Reply: Glad to hear it. >;)

I kid. There are three chapters left and an epilogue, so I hope you enjoy the rest of this tale. Thanks for all your support so far!

-Brennan

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