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| Not a day like others by Laikwalâssê | 5 Review(s) |
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| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/28/2013 |
| Oh wow, Lai! This is one seriously intense chapter. I felt every moment of Elrond's anguish and horror as he watched Imladris fall. Not sure where you're going with this, but now I'm hanging off the cliff waiting for the next chapter. Author Reply: this was my intention: to transfer the emotions of Elrond right to my readers. The next chapter will release all anguish, I promise. Please dont tumble off the cliff until then,*g*. Thank you for reviewing, Fiondil. Lai | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/27/2013 |
| Glorfindel's second says "he's dead", who else would he mean? And Erestor died beside him. One of his sons cradleing his dead twin. Rooms full of hacked to bits children and women. This would be the stuff of nightmare for Elrond, all right. The only thing now would be for him to open some door in time to see some orc hacking his wife to pieces. Depending upon when this was suppossed to be, he might have thought her safely in the Undying Lands. I am still betting on this being a nightmare. But who is having it? And when? No mention has yet been made of his daughter. Is Elrond having the dream during one of her stays in Lorien? Rhetorical question, of course. I know you won't be answering it, just yet! Author Reply: a nightmare, mmmhm? You are near the mark but...not quite! That would be the only possible explanation, or? LOL! I could have killed Arwen also, yes, but she is in Lorien, now you know at what time this is happening. I´m glad you are curious ti know how this will be solved. Stay until the next chapter and you will know. Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciateit. Lai | |
| Ilya | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/27/2013 |
| Elladan, Glorfindel AND numerous residents of Rivendell slain? WHAT is going on? where in Arda did all the Orcs come from? Poor Elrond.... Author Reply: yes where did they come from all of a sudden? Hang on a bit long to the next chapter and all questions will be answered. Poor Elrond indeed, he needs now all our support. LOL! Thank you for reiewing. Lai | |
| Matt | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/27/2013 |
| This is an interesting story. Obviously A/U but in many ways its kind of hanging in air because you don't explain how the A/U comes loose from canon. You write action well and I'll have to look at your other stories more closely to see what you've done with them. Thanks for an interesting start, I'll look forward to more. Author Reply: and again it´s no AU! The miracle will be lifted with the next chapter, promise! I´m so glad that you find me writing action well - it´s not so really my playground. And if you are willing to look at my other stories I would be happy. Thank you so much for a most encouraging review. Lai | |
| ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/27/2013 |
| WOW! This is so sad! Author Reply: yes it is! I had to sniff while writing. Thank you for reviewing, Ellie. Lai | |