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Thunder & Lightning  by Lady Bluejay 5 Review(s)
Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/12/2013
I can well imagine some folk would be angry at Eowyn leaving them to ride to war. Poor Lothiriel seated between Elladan and Eomer. A most enjoyable chapter.

Author Reply: Thank you. But sitting between those two could be rather pleasant! LBJ

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/7/2013
A most interesting situation, being between Elladan and Eomer. Love that Elladan also intends to give Eomer a bit of a comeuppance. Seems several people feel that the new King of Rohan needs a bit of--discipline! Heh!

Author Reply: Yes - he's a bit full of himself, isn't he. LBJ

CelethReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/7/2013
I thought Lothiriel was going to tell Hungife about how she lost her betrothed in the war. But I guess it wouldn't really count, since she wasn't really in love with him and didn't really grieve that much?

Oh ho, so the fish is starting to circle the bait? Not that Lothiriel would appreciate being called a bait! But I love it that you included Elladan here, and in a teasing mood too. Poor Eomer doesn't stand a chance. I look forward to reading more about what Elladan (with his partner in crime - er, twin Elrohir) will cook up to torment Eomer. I found it a pity that the sons of Elrond had only a few speaking parts in the LOTR book, and nothing in the movie at all; all the glory went to Legolas.





Author Reply: Yes, we don't really know much about them do we. You will see a little more of Elladan but I am not promising a great deal.LBJ

anaReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/7/2013
What an interesting triangle!
One of the beautiful twins at last.
The description of Aldburg very detailed.
What would the elf be thinking of elven Lothíriel?
Waiting for more!

The young widow, an interesting addition too.

Author Reply: Well I had to add someone to temper the relationship between our main characters.I thought Elladan a good choice and liked to make him different from his brothers.LBJ

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/6/2013
This is getting better and better! Love the final interactions between Eomer, Lotheriel, and Elladan. I am always interested in any references to the widows and orphans and how they managed.

Author Reply: Thanks. I always though there was so much celebration when there would have been so much misery. LBJ

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