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| Agape's Attempts by Agape4Gondor | 4 Review(s) |
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| Linaewen | Reviewed Chapter: 77 on 6/16/2013 |
| You should see the grin on my face!! What a sweet little birthday present you've penned for me! I hope Boromir's Linaewen will return soon to take away his melancholy! :-) Author Reply: *does happy dance* I'm so glad you liked it. I knew I had to do something. Bless you for your friendship and support over these many, many years. Now - hint hint - to get back to the Mumak. Did you happen to notice where 'she' is from? ROTFL | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 77 on 6/16/2013 |
| A beautiful moment between the brothers, Agape. Alas for what never happened! Poor Boromir. Author Reply: I can always hope that there was a moment of joy. Thanks for your review. You know it is most appreciated. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 77 on 6/16/2013 |
| I hope that the lady would have been worthy of his love. Excellent! Author Reply: With a name like Lineawen, how could she not be. Bless you for the stellar response. *blushes* | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 77 on 6/16/2013 |
| Alas, poor Boromir! I particularly like this piece of description. It brings the scene to life, as if I'm right there. Nice job fitting a whole lot of meaning into just a few words. Faramir shifted on the hard stone ledge overlooking the Pelennor. The sky, crystal blue as he’d ever seen it, caused him to shade his eyes. Anduin cut through the farmlands below like a great blue-grey ribbon. Author Reply: Lindelea! You made my day. I've been working on a fantasy, hoping to get it published, and I wasn't happy with it. I realize now, after your comment about the description, that that is what is lacking. Just one or two sentences added to a scene to 'bring it to life.' BLESS YOU!!! | |