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| Thunder & Lightning by Lady Bluejay | 5 Review(s) |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/3/2013 |
| What an unexpected twist!You have me truly worried for poor Lothiriel. Surely her rival did not expect this? Author Reply: No,she didn't, but we never know the consequences of stupid actions. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/29/2013 |
| Ohhhhh dear! Once upon a time in a story called "Drummer", Amrothos's future wife, Devorin, faced three ruffian assailants on a mountain road with a large dog and a Rohrric warhorse for defenders. But her help was on the way, and arrived "just in the nick of time" as they say. THIS little cliffhanger seems just a wee bit less hopeful than that one turned out. Time to start obsessively checking my Inbox! Author Reply: Brigands come in very useful for a bit of excitement - LoL. But you are right, Lothy is on her own in this one. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/28/2013 |
| Hmm. Alwunn appears to have found a means of getting rid of unwanted competition. Although I doubt sincerely that Eomer is going to give up once he realizes that Alwunn has left Lothiriel out in the woods unprotected. And I think that Alwunn will end up getting a rather nasty comeuppance in time. Author Reply: I think Alwuun might have spoiled her chances as far as Eomer is concerned. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/27/2013 |
| Meep! Now that really is a cliff-hanger. I wonder if Alwunn has already convinced everyone that Lothiriel has set off for home, or something similar, hoping that she will therefore be out alone all night? Author Reply: Would I leave her out all night alone? Lol. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/26/2013 |
| Terrifying! I didn't see this coming when we met the jealous girl! I'm sure she led Lothiriel off to be mean, not to set her up (or at least I hope so), but boy it turned out badly! I hope you update this one quickly! Author Reply: Alwuun didn't stop to think of the consequences of her actions, did she? Thanks a lot for taking the time to review. LBJ | |