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| Thunder & Lightning by Lady Bluejay | 5 Review(s) |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/22/2013 |
| I can see how at home in Rohan Lothiriel now is. Eomer will know taking the mead cup from her is significant.I hope they can declare their feelings for one another. A most enjoyable chapter. Author Reply: It's about time they faced the truth, I feel. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Ana | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/22/2013 |
Enjoying the last chapters very much. I hope you won´t end your story without telling us why were the brigands heading North. Who was hiring them? A very interesting prospect. Waiting eagerly to have Éomer´s P.O.V. Author Reply: I was hoping that readers would guess they were heading for the 'scouring of the shire.' As to who was hiring them - well it was obviously originally initiated by Saruman. Eomer's pov? You will hear from him but not directly. Glad you are enjoying, thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/13/2013 |
| At last she is beginning to think more clearly, and her mother's advice is as good as she'd hoped for. Good to see that she is willing to listen this time, and that she knows her heart better. Author Reply: Hopefully they will sort it all out in the last chapter - I would hate to leave them unhappy. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/13/2013 |
| I suspect Lothierial's parents laughed all the way to Edoras. Their sort of plan worked well. Still really enjoying this. Author Reply: Yes, it certainly is working out for her father. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ | |
| MistyC | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/12/2013 |
| I've been following this story, as well as most of your Eomer/Lothiriel stories for quite some time. I love your writing style and characters, but tend to be a lurker and not comment much. I'm looking forward to seeing if Eomer can finally find the right words to convince Lothiriel that he really does love her. I only have one minor complaint. When Alwunn said the line 'Well, whatever,' it kind of pulled me out of the story. I don't think anyone in Middle Earth would say that... at least not and mean it in the context we would today. Other than that, loving the story and looking forward to the resolution of this fiery couple. Author Reply: I think you are right and will change that phrase when I do the other corrections. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review. I will update as soon as I can. LBJ | |