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| Emissary of the Mark by Soledad | 3 Review(s) |
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| Matt | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/26/2013 |
| Yes! Great chapter even though it necessarily moved slowly--since the traveling party was doing so too. You still get some good information in there and leave a nice little bump (not really a cliffy) at the end. Definitely looking forawrd to the next chapter and thankful for your hard work on this one. Author Reply: Oh, sorry, I forgot to reply to your kind review. I'm glad you liked the chapter, despite the slowness. *g* | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/25/2013 |
| How clever the women were to escape! I was sorry to see Strider leave. i think Imogen should have warned Elfhelm sooner that she may not be able to have children. A most interesting and vivid chapter. Author Reply: Yeah, it's a shame that Strider left, but he had to get Gollum, so he couldn't dawdle any longer. As for Imogen, the fact that the shieldmaidens use contraceptives is a known one in Rhún. She simply didn't think that Elfhelm might not know. | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/25/2013 |
| Good for Hemma and Birgid - although I do hope their decision doesn't create problems in the future. I was quietly confident that Aragorn would be able to heal Imogen - seems I had guessed wrong! Which is always good for the reader when the writer has twists and turns that throw us off the scent. And this is so not a good place for them to be that I can't see them getting to the moment of truth with Elfhelm's father without further adventure. Author Reply: Actually, they will, which is a good thing. Elfhelm will need all his wits about him when facing his father. *g* Thank you for reading and reviewing, it's much appreciated. | |