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The Proposition  by Lindelea 3 Review(s)
EverlightReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/3/2014
So complicated everything is getting! It's a wonder that they can keep it all straight.

‘Someday, perhaps, they’ll know what we’ve done, what you’ve done, and they’ll make a song out of it.’

‘Such songs are always made of the nastiest, most uncomfortable experiences, I’m afraid,’ Rosemary said

True, so true. Exciting to listen too after the fact but never enjoyable to live through.

I am very glad you have contiued this story. It give a whole new perspective to the 'Troubles'

Author Reply: "As usual" will be a great help -- once they have habits firmly established (and as it is, they'll be drawing on old habits as much as possible), then habit will help to keep them safe.

Thank you!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/3/2014
Well, the plans are well made, at least. Now, to see them put into action.

Author Reply: Knowing Rosemary and Hally, they won't be letting the grass grow under their feet...

Thanks!

Garnet TookReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/2/2014
This story makes me think of a suspence movie about some underground cell operating in an occupied country. It has a sort of WWII feel to it.

They really are trying to cover every possible contingency and detail. Of course they have to not just for their own safety but for that of the children as well.

Looking forward to where this will go next.

Author Reply: You're right, it does -- perhaps because the Resistance in WWII is the most familiar or best publicized.

I wonder what they haven't thought of, yet? (Actually, I wonder what *I* haven't thought of, yet? Yikes!)

Thanks!

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