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| Estel - Hope by Laikwalâssê | 7 Review(s) |
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| eliza | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/11/2014 |
| Oh no, not an evil cliffie!!! Oy Vey,I have the patience of a knat, I'm the girl that cheats and reads the ending when the angst gets to great. Wowza, what a great beginning. Now to try and dream up what could have rattled Elrond. I enjoy the two different POV's. Author Reply: Elrond has all reason to be stressed, this I can already promise. I´m glad you liked the different POV´s. It was a joy to write. The next update will come soon. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/10/2014 |
| You have become a writer of surprise twists, turns of plot and fate that are quite unexpected. Elves can fade from grief, I wonder. But that would be a slow process. What, indeed, were the events of the previous evening? I will be anxiously "tuning in" to find out. You are looking here at the story from many characters points of view. This should be good! Author Reply: my writing is unexpected? Then I have done something right. THank you so much. Indeed elves can die from grief. The events of the previous evening are not pleasant at all, this I can promise. Elrond is not shocked without reason. The different characted views make the story more interesting, or so I hope. Hopefully you are "turning in" for the next chapter. Update soon - promise. Lai | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/10/2014 |
| Poor Elrond, and the poor children of Elrond. You know, Tolkien described him as being "kind as summer". I wonder if some of that kindness resulted from the sorrows he lived through. Author Reply: I never considered this but maybe you are right. Thank you so much for your lovely review, Lindelea. I really appreciat it. Lai | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/10/2014 |
| Oh, how angsty. Poor Elrond, but poor Glorfindel even more. Can't wait to see where you from here, Lai. Author Reply: angsty? Then I have done something right, but I promise I have just started. LOL! Thank you so much for an appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/10/2014 |
| It had to be difficult for everyone in the valley, but particularly for those who were so close to Celebrian. It is time to let the healing begin. Author Reply: yes, Elrond is in dire need of a respite and true healing but I fear until his sons see reason there will no healing be found.Thank you for your review, Larner. Lai | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/9/2014 |
| What sad memories! This does not bode well... Author Reply: you are right, that glimpse in Elrond´s desolate soul does indeed not bode well. And it has only started. Thank you so much for reviewing, Ellie. Lai | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/9/2014 |
| Fantastic beginning. Hope you plan on frequent updates. Thank you. Author Reply: thank you so much. My beta willing I plan on frequent updates - promise. Lai | |