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| marinus stiria by bryn | 3 Review(s) |
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| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/25/2004 |
| Wow that was great. But I thought Morgoth...No you're right. He was exiled. Wow. This is getting huge. The Valar should be aware of this. And that man, Morts somebody. He is the Spawn of Hell. Meanwhile Aragorn and Arwen are listening to a woman ranting about hot pies? *Good grief* But Bitaliel? Wow that woman is raving. That scares me. I'm terrified. Please don't hurt Legolas. Cheers. | |
| Es | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/25/2004 |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/20/2003 |
| Conversations in the Void...yes, I see the resemblence now. :) (BTW, I did put your name in there, and I will update it on Weds.) Brilliant how you managed to come up with this! Much worse things than stolen cows. That's just...ridiculous! (Yet funny.) She has arrived, although it much worse condition than anyone would have wanted. I like how she speaks to the doll. (Well, no not 'like it' exactly, but I believe that it is fitting for one who has gone mad.) Where did she get that rhyme? I mean, where is it from? Who chanted it, long ago in the depths of time? Your right...that is an interesting mental picture. Hm. Only the elves would fight over trees... Yeah, Bergil does remind me of a less arrogant Halbard...but slightly different. Why the warning? I didn't notice much in this chapter, although I'm sur ethat the later ones will be bloody... Author Reply: I see you've updated 'Void,' I'll have to go check it out. *grin* Er, I have no idea where Bitaliel heard that rhyme. Maybe it's a children's rhyme sung by those in Belfalas. A lot of children's rhymes tend to be rather creepy if you think about it. ('Ring Around the Rosy?' When I found out what that was about my skin crawled for weeks. Uuugh.) Elves fighting over trees... Oh man, what I wouldn't give to see a showdown between Galadriel and a Thranduil/Oropher team. Galadriel would win against Thranduil (as much as I love the King), but add Oropher to the mix and things could get pretty interesting. I put a warning this chapter because of The Eyes scene. If I'm even slightly worried it may be graphic, I tend to put warnings. Better safe than sorry, as they say. :) Thank you for the review!!! | |