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| Last Hope by AfterEver | 2 Review(s) |
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| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/21/2003 |
| A very nice chapter. I enjoyed reading your interpretation of the Twins, especially Elrohir. I don't think Elladan is as well explored as his twin. I assume Gilraen will learn more of him later on though. Your depiction of young Aragorn is very realistic. He acts like a child of his age would act; that's rare in stories featuring young Aragorn. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Keep up the fine work! LKK | |
| Brenda G. | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/20/2003 |
| I really like the brothers. It would seem that Aragorn has taken to them well. It is good to see Gilraen relaxing in the safety and comfort of her twin escorts. It will be interesting to see what she makes of Lord Elrond and what he makes of her. The adventure continues - onward to Rivendell with all its magic and mystery. To live among elves... I think I may be envious of Mistress Gilraen already. Well done. Looking forward to the next chapter. BG | |