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Sea Flower  by Soledad 2 Review(s)
Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/4/2014
What a great gripping chapter!I wonder what Ivriniel will decide?I'll be fascinated to learn more about the "magic" and her reactions.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/3/2014
Poor Ivriniel is not exactly being given much in the way of choices here - marry the Umbari lord or remain his prisoner forever. A gilded cage is still a cage. Of course, what can we expect of a family that sent their daughter off into hostile territory to be a "consort" as a political ploy, to her eventual death...

Loved the replay of the Bois-Guilbert/Rebecca scene from IVANHOE.

The plot is thickening! More soon, I hope.



Author Reply: Thank you, Raksha. :))

This story writes itself in bits and pieces, as inspiration hits and as I can do the necessary research. Umbar isn't exactly a well- documented part of Middle-earth, which gives me a certain level of freedom, but in the end whatever I do must fit into canon, so it's a slow process. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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