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| Creation Song of Ilúvatar by Fadesintothewest | 2 Review(s) |
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| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 10/19/2003 |
| You have captured the paralyzing fear of the shadow, the true weapon of the Nazgul too. Thranduil is wise to see what has happened and why - for now he knows the signs and can defend against it. The poor captain; I am glad he did not die alone. The final moments of comfort in another's arms can be enough to ease that passage, and for Namo to beckon for him. The sorrow and grief were handled well. Lenmana is growing to understand, and I like her in the world of dreams - easier to communicate and there is more time for understanding, as dreams are not interrupted by all the things that consume time during waking hours. Very well written chapter. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 10/19/2003 |
| I thought this was an extremely elfy chapter. The scene with Thranduil at the start was powerful. He knows that the shadow is using sorrow and you can see it all around him. Then we see through your OC's eyes and notice how different the elves are and it's almost scary. And then we get that horrible scene in the death glade. Great chapter all around | |