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| marinus stiria by bryn | 2 Review(s) |
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| Capn Jak Sparrow | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/19/2003 |
| This is a great story so far bryn! I am really loving it! | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/9/2003 |
| Haha...I love Bergil's sleepy plan. That's awesome. I do the same thing. :) "Pull, don't push." I loved that! I think that we are all speaking from experience here. *Ahem.* Ew...the eyelid description. Mm...about halfway through the story, your paragraphs have double spaces in them. Haha...Arwens eyes...the power of a woman. Interesting that this madwoman has such insight on this situation. Marvolous, really. Bergil + Bitaliel + crazy King Aragorn= Interesting plot! Incredible descriptions of the sand-supported palace. I love that idea. I'd love to read more, but I"ve barely had time to get on and update "Return from the Void." (Yup, it's updated, and more chapters are forthcoming!) I'll try and get on and review again soon--I must know what happens! | |