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| Moriquendi by fan81981 | 2 Review(s) |
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| ??? | Reviewed Chapter: 45 on 2/11/2004 |
| Thank you! The text is nicely readable now. | |
| ??? | Reviewed Chapter: 45 on 2/6/2004 |
| Um, another minor problem. The text in this chapter is way too small. Even with my browser text size set as large as it will go, I still cannot read the words. (I'm sorry if my pointing out this and the chapter that had the wrong chapter in it offends you. No offense is intended - I know it was an accident, I'm just trying to be helpful.) This is a very interesting story. I think that the way you have envisioned the Avari is interesting, because you have made them so very different, which makes sense. Also, I like how you have referred to several things in passing and not really explained them yet (like what Rhinure knows about Eruante) because this makes me want to read more to find out about those things in addition to finding out what will happen in the main plot line (you will eventually explain them, right? in a sequel, if not in this story?) Author Reply: I am sorry if I implied I was offended. I am very glad you pointed out a mistake. As a reader that is your right and as someone who has posted on a public site it is my responsibility. I have changed the font and it is reading fine on my computer but please tell me if it isn't - I will try posting it again. As for the mysteries surrounded Rhinure and her connection with Eruante - all will be explained. Its actually part of the main plot line. But you will have to wait for it. ;) | |