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| The White Horse and the White Banner by Chigger | 2 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/17/2003 |
| Poor, Legolas! His life has been filled with great loss. I never think of what it must cost the elves to be immortal and to see everyone go before them but this chapter has made me wonder if it would be worth it. Oh, and on a happy note, I am enjoying the fussing with the hair bit. LOL Author Reply: I'm not very good with Elves, so I'm glad you liked it. I thought long and hard about that scene and it's good to know that it came off right. Much of his memories are based on what Coriel has done with his history, but I like what she's done, so I went ahead and put it in there. I would think that even Elves would have to redo their braids now and again, right? I have a hard enough time keeping mine in while just sitting around the house! How much harder is it when you've been riding at breakneck speeds all day? | |
| Amaniel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/12/2003 |
| I couldn't tell if Coriel put in anything or not, but I bet you did most of it yourself. You're a pretty good writer! I haven't really been reading anything from the men side of things. It's a refreshing idea. I also had a question concerning Legolas and Hirilian. I was thinking they had some sort of brother-sister type of relationship, but let me know if I am wrong. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters! Do you know when they'll be ready? Author Reply: Thank you for the feedback! This story has been slowly peetering out due to lack of feedback. Legolas and Hirilian have a brother-sister kind of relationship, but for the most part he's just a very good friend. As to the other chapters, I really have no clue. My main problem is that I'm writing them in rather mixed up order because I have great ideas for later in the story and have to get them down right away. As it is, I have the next chapter written, I just need to go through and edit it. My characters tend to ramble in this next one. Thanks again! :) | |